It started with...

A bad habit of mine.

I have this very bad habit where; not only I use a toilet for the handicapped , I unlock the door after I have done my business then I wash my hands. ...( I will continue this.)

Sketches! my Horrid Sketches.

I really need to practice more. I can't draw well... but I am slowly trying.....
"Every adventure requires a first step. Trite, but true, even here."-Chesire Cat

MIND YOUR LANGUAGE

Jeremy Brown-Teacher,He is a fair teacher,he strive to help his students to learn english....even when he is fruastrated he tries his best not to give up on them. As a typical male he get distracted with pretty girl student.


Ms Dolores Courtney-Principal, Doesn't trust Mr Brown abilities,she is a feminist, thinking women  can do all things better.Strict and pompous. Mean and sarcastic.


Student


Giovanni Capello-Chef,Italian, Loud, seems to be the one that can control the class.As a typical male he get distracted with pretty girl student.Take things literally


Anna Schmidt-Nanny aka au pair ,German, head strong.Very proud of her country, headstrong


Chung Su-Lee-Secretary of embassy of China. Very devoted to chairman Mao's teaching and communism .Mix up between L and R.Have difference with Taro since there a conflict between japanese and Chinese


Tarō Nagazumi-Japanese Rep for Electronic company,Always have a camera as a stereotype Japanese love to take picture.Seems to think Japan is best. Like to add "-to" or "o" to english word.Likes to bow....


Jamila Ranjha-Indian housewife.Bad in english.


Max-A greek who works at a Shipping company, A stereotype of a male who like pretty girls...tend to add H with his words


Juan Cervantes-A spanish bartender who is really bad in english.carry himself very manly like a mafia.Quite short tempered.


Ranjeet Singh-London underground worker and a devoted Sikh.Seems to hate Muslims. When angered he took out his knife. he like to apologies with "a thousand apologies" .


Danielle Favre-A French Au pair that is a stereotype of a beautiful air head. Hates the attention of some of the male in class but likes Mr Brown.


Ali Nadeem-Pakistan and unemployed.Devoted Muslim always wear the Jinnah hat.He is very vocal and like to misinterpret things and examples.

Chase Final

The Chase

by

Wiratman Astra Abraham Josep

(2C)

Ryan wants to marry his girlfriend so he bake a cake and put a ring in it- to surprise her in her birthday- but unfortunately she ate it, he wants to retain the element of surprise so goes great length to get it back but he failed,Jaime went on  fit of hiccup and expel the ring out of the apartment, Ryan tries to get it but a hobo got it 1^st and they got into a fight which Ryan won but lands him  in jail for fighting but was bailed by his girlfriend and he finally propose.

My Blog: http://reeverrayne.blogspot.com/

Date: 23 Oct 2011

EXECUTIVE SUMMARY: : Who was the genius who thought of putting a ring in a cake was proposing was a good  idea of surprise? Martha Steward? Those badly made Rom com? That guy must be high on crack cause they haven’t thought the possibility that the ring might get eaten. All I wants to do was to do a surprise proposal to my girlfriend….Was that really too much to ask?

STORY / SCRIPT TITLE: The Chase

1 SENTENCE SUMMARY:

Ryan wants to marry his girlfriend so he bake a cake and put a ring in it- to surprise her in her birthday- but unfortunately she ate it, he wants to retain the element of surprise so goes great length to get it back but he failed, Jaime went on  fit of hiccup and expel the ring out of the apartment, Ryan tries to get it but a hobo got it 1^st and they got into a fight which Ryan won but lands him  in jail for fighting but was bailed by his girlfriend and he finally propose.

SYNOPSIS:

It all started innocently when he bakes his girlfriend cake and putting a ring inside to do a surprise proposal. But things couldn’t come easier for Ryan when his girlfriend ate the cake slice with ring in it. He failed in getting the ring out discreetly until (un)fortunately the ring was expelled out of Jaime’s stomach when she had a huge fit of hiccup. From there on it snow balls itself down till he is in jail. Was today a keep-Ryan-from-proposing day? No, couldn’t be Ryan checked but it sure felt like it when he land himself in jail while trying to get his proposal ring back from a hobo who took it.
CHARACTER LIST (All characters)

Ryan

Jaime

Jaime friends

Victim of laxative

Guard officer

Chief officer

Hobo

CHARACTER BIO (Key Characters only)

Ryan

Ryan is the main character of the story. He seems to have a stroke of bad luck. He doesn’t like to give up. He is very persistent and head strong. He is a great baker. He wants things to go by his plan. Good in improvisation.

Jaime

She is a happy and fun girl. She looks things in a positive light. May look dumb but she is very clever. Gets hiccup when she drinks Alcohol.

3 ACT STRUCTURE: (in point form below)

ACT1 SETUP	ACT2 CONFRONTATION	ACT3 RESOLUTION
Key Character(s): Ryan Jaime Must-have Info: -Party set up -Ring put into cake -Jaime ate the cake and the ring	Confrontation: Trying to get the ring out and failing several times.	Climax (Grand Finale): Got into a fight and got the ring back. Got arrested for fighting but bailed by girlfriend and in the end he can propose.
MOTIVE:Ryan wants to get the ring back to propose to Jaime.	TURNING POINT: She expelled it herself because of having too much hiccup.	MOTIVE RESOLVED? He proposed and she said “yes”
Conflict/Obstacles -Jaime ate the ring -Hobo took it after the ring has been expelled out. -keeping the ring in secret	Conflict/Obstacles: expel out of the window Up the Stakes: A hobo took it.	Moral of the Story if any:

SCRIPT

FADE IN:

ACT 1 (SETUP)

SCENE 1:

INT.POLICE STATION, MUGSHOT ROOM. DAWN

Camera flashes.Ryan’s Mugshot is being taken in a police station.Ryan is battered and bruised

  Ryan(narration)

This definitely not how I picture myself in the last 6 hours. What I envision was me in my bed with my girlfriend …making love..Probably right about….now …How did it happen,why did it happen, you may ask. Well, it all started with a ring…

SCENE 2:

CUT TO: Kitchen.Close up shot to a cake batter MORNING

Ryan puts a ring in the cake batter and smiles and put it in a oven. A banner comes down with a writing “Happy Birthday Jaime”. The apartment getting decorated, cake appears on the table, guest and, Ryan and Jaime were in the middle and a cake between them, slowly appearing in a transition style. The morning turned evening.

Ryan and Jaime seem to talk happily. Jaime cracks a funny joke and Ryan seems to laugh which distract both of them. While Ryan is still distracted laughing, Jaime swallow a piece of cake that the ring could be seen. She drinks a can of beer to smooth the full throat. Ryan was too late to stop her. His laugh died on his lips. He was stunned and shock on what is happening. He quickly recovers. She hiccups.

Ryan (smiling on the face but frantically thinking)

What should I do? I don’t want to ruin the surprise…but….

Jaime

….And I told her-or him if you want to be politically correct-that it’s totally not an obsession! It’s just a concentrated form of adoration!

(Looks at Ryan with a worried face)

Hun, are you okay?

Ryan

Oh errr I’m fine! I was just wondering would you like a dance?

Jaime

Oh! Okay!
(Takes Ryan hand and go dancing with Ryan)

ACT2 (CONFRONTATION)

SCENE 3:

Ryan and Jaime dance tango. Ryan starts twirling her a lot.
Ryan( internal thoughts)

I hope this works….

They dance for a long time and Ryan was sweating and tired. Jaime on the other hand was just having fun. (Fast forward screen or time skip).Jaime spot old friends and she wanted to go there and catch up with them. Ryan lets her go and he fell on the floor tired. He took a moment to recover then follow Jaime. He hug Jaime from the back and squeeze her hard. She hiccups

SCENE 4:

Jaime (smiles playfully)

Hey not too hard.

Ryan

Haha don’t know my strength sometimes…

Ryan( internal thoughts)

Damn next plan

SCENE 5:

Quick Montage of his plan failing. Slapping her back jokingly and she slap his back in return and it hurt him. Putting laxative on her drink (beer), but his friend took it and drink it is for giving to her. (She was drinking in the back ground foreshadowing the events going to happen). Ryan was feeling frustrated as he was having momentary madness, Jaime in the background started hiccup fit and expel the ring to the window. Ryan saw the ring flew out of the apartment in slow motion. He looks out of the window to see where it fell and he quickly ran down to get it.

SCENE 6:

CUT TO: Outside, Night

He was too late. A homeless hobo got it 1^st.

Hobo

GOLD FELL FROM HEAVENS!!

Ryan

That’s Mine!

 Hobo

I got it 1^st!!ITS MINE!!!

SCENE 7:

The Hobo ran and Ryan chase after him. There a Slow mo shot. After a chase Ryan rugby tackle the hobo and they go into a fight. Kung Fu fight filled with slow mo shot and exaggerated kicks and everything. But in the end Ryan won and took the ring back.

Ryan(Punch the air up pose and did a little victory dance )

GOT IT!

Police car light appears on the back ground.

Police

You’re both under arrest for fighting!

Ryan(still Punch the air up pose frozen but smile dies)

Shit.

ACT3 (RESOLUTION)

SCENE 8:

CUT TO: Jail cell

Ryan

And that’s how I got here….

Ryan was talking to the guard officer behind the bars. He was laughing in the background.

Ryan

This isn’t Funny you know?

Guard Officer

I know I Know but….hahaahahahahah

Ryan rolled his eyes. Chief Officer came in and the guard suddenly stops laughing and straighten up. Chief Officer walks in front of Ryan’s cell.

. Chief Officer

Ryan Woodwalker. You’re bailed by a lass.

Chief Officer open Ryan cell and get lead him out. As he walk out he saw the hobo in the cell.He was sleeping peacefully with a serene smile on his face..

Ryan(inner Dialog)

I guess for some people…being in jail is a blessing in disguise…at least now he will have a roof on his head…..

The guard Officer smiles as he jog near him and whisper.
Guard Officer

Good luck…..

SCENE 9:

CUT TO: Outside Police Station ,Morning

Jaime

OH GOD ! Ryan what happen?

Ryan

Forget that….I’ve been wanting to do this all night,I’ve been through Hell and back just to get this

Ryan takes out the ring. Jamie Gasp.

Ryan

From the 1^st time I saw you…I knew I will marry you….So Jaime Lisender…Would you like to marry me?

EXT.Black Still

Jaime

Yes.

THE END

A man wants to propose to his girlfriend in her birthday party>he put the ring in a cake>The girl swallow the ring>She unfortunately doesn't know that she well swallow the ring> the guy doesn't want to give up his element of surprise so he doesn't say> He secretly tries to get the ring out of her in various secret means> Hugging her tightly>failed> put laxative to her food> her friend took it and eat it instead>(the girl was drinking alcohol with her friends and it will be shown subconsciously in the background)> she drank too much and she puke out of the window> the guy could see the ring getting out of her> ran down but a homeless hobo took it 1st> the hobo doesn't want to give the ring> the guy chase the hobo and he tackle the hobo>he had a fight with the hobo>he manage to get the ring in the end> police caught him for fighting as they witness the fight>he went to jail>the next day the girlfriend went out to bail him out> He propose to her in the police station.

the chase script

The Chase

by

Wiratman Astra Abraham Josep

(2C)

Ryan wants to marry his girlfriend so he bake a cake and put a ring in it- to surprise her in her birthday- but unfortunately she ate it, he wants to retain the element of surprise so goes great length to get it back but he failed,Jaime went on  fit of hiccup and expel the ring out of the apartment, Ryan tries to get it but a hobo got it 1^st and they got into a fight which Ryan won but lands him  in jail for fighting but was bailed by his girlfriend and he finally propose.

My Blog: http://reeverrayne.blogspot.com/

Date: 23 Oct 2011

EXECUTIVE SUMMARY: : Who was the genius who thought of putting a ring in a cake was proposing was a good  idea of surprise? Martha Steward? Those badly made Rom com? That guy must be high on crack cause they haven’t thought the possibility that the ring might get eaten. All I wants to do was to do a surprise proposal to my girlfriend….Was that really too much to ask?

STORY / SCRIPT TITLE: The Chase

1 SENTENCE SUMMARY:

Ryan wants to marry his girlfriend so he bake a cake and put a ring in it- to surprise her in her birthday- but unfortunately she ate it, he wants to retain the element of surprise so goes great length to get it back but he failed, Jaime went on  fit of hiccup and expel the ring out of the apartment, Ryan tries to get it but a hobo got it 1^st and they got into a fight which Ryan won but lands him  in jail for fighting but was bailed by his girlfriend and he finally propose.

SYNOPSIS:

It all started innocently when he bakes his girlfriend cake and putting a ring inside to do a surprise proposal. But things couldn’t come easier for Ryan when his girlfriend ate the cake slice with ring in it. He failed in getting the ring out discreetly until (un)fortunately the ring was expelled out of Jaime’s stomach when she had a huge fit of hiccup. From there on it snow balls itself down till he is in jail. Was today a keep-Ryan-from-proposing day? No, couldn’t be Ryan checked but it sure felt like it when he land himself in jail while trying to get his proposal ring back from a hobo who took it.
CHARACTER LIST (All characters)

Ryan

Jaime

Jaime friends

Victim of laxative

Guard officer

Chief officer

Hobo

CHARACTER BIO (Key Characters only)

Ryan

Ryan is the main character of the story. He seems to have a stroke of bad luck. He doesn’t like to give up. He is very persistent and head strong. He is a great baker. He wants things to go by his plan. Good in improvisation.

Jaime

She is a happy and fun girl. She looks things in a positive light. May look dumb but she is very clever. Gets hiccup when she drinks Alcohol.

3 ACT STRUCTURE: (in point form below)

ACT1 SETUP	ACT2 CONFRONTATION	ACT3 RESOLUTION
Key Character(s): Ryan Jaime Must-have Info: -Party set up -Ring put into cake -Jaime ate the cake and the ring	Confrontation: Trying to get the ring out and failing several times.	Climax (Grand Finale): Got into a fight and got the ring back. Got arrested for fighting but bailed by girlfriend and in the end he can propose.
MOTIVE:Ryan wants to get the ring back to propose to Jaime.	TURNING POINT: She expelled it herself because of having too much hiccup.	MOTIVE RESOLVED? He proposed and she said “yes”
Conflict/Obstacles -Jaime ate the ring -Hobo took it after the ring has been expelled out. -keeping the ring in secret	Conflict/Obstacles: expel out of the window Up the Stakes: A hobo took it.	Moral of the Story if any:

SCRIPT

FADE IN:

ACT 1 (SETUP)

SCENE 1:

INT.POLICE STATION, MUGSHOT ROOM. DAWN

Camera flashes.Ryan’s Mugshot is being taken in a police station.Ryan is battered and bruised

  Ryan(narration)

This definitely not how I picture myself in the last 6 hours. What I envision was me in my bed with my girlfriend …making love..Probably right about….now …How did it happen,why did it happen, you may ask. Well, it all started with a ring…

SCENE 2:

CUT TO: Kitchen.Close up shot to a cake batter MORNING

Ryan puts a ring in the cake batter and smiles and put it in a oven. A banner comes down with a writing “Happy Birthday Jaime”. The apartment getting decorated, cake appears on the table, guest and, Ryan and Jaime were in the middle and a cake between them, slowly appearing in a transition style. The morning turned evening.

Ryan and Jaime seem to talk happily. Jaime cracks a funny joke and Ryan seems to laugh which distract both of them. While Ryan is still distracted laughing, Jaime swallow a piece of cake that the ring could be seen. She drinks a can of beer to smooth the full throat. Ryan was too late to stop her. His laugh died on his lips. He was stunned and shock on what is happening. He quickly recovers. She hiccups.

Ryan (smiling on the face but frantically thinking)

What should I do? I don’t want to ruin the surprise…but….

Jaime

….And I told her-or him if you want to be politically correct-that it’s totally not an obsession! It’s just a concentrated form of adoration!

(Looks at Ryan with a worried face)

Hun, are you okay?

Ryan

Oh errr I’m fine! I was just wondering would you like a dance?

Jaime

Oh! Okay!
(Takes Ryan hand and go dancing with Ryan)

ACT2 (CONFRONTATION)

SCENE 3:

Ryan and Jaime dance tango. Ryan starts twirling her a lot.Ryan( internal thoughts)

I hope this works….

They dance for a long time and Ryan was sweating and tired. Jaime on the other hand was just having fun. (Fast forward screen or time skip).Jaime spot old friends and she wanted to go there and catch up with them. Ryan lets her go and he fell on the floor tired. He took a moment to recover then follow Jaime. He hug Jaime from the back and squeeze her hard. She hiccups

SCENE 4:

Jaime (smiles playfully)

Hey not too hard.

Ryan

Haha don’t know my strength sometimes…

Ryan( internal thoughts)

Damn next plan

SCENE 5:

Quick Montage of his plan failing. Slapping her back jokingly and she slap his back in return and it hurt him. Putting laxative on her drink (beer), but his friend took it and drink it is for giving to her. (She was drinking in the back ground foreshadowing the events going to happen). Ryan was feeling frustrated as he was having momentary madness, Jaime in the background started hiccup fit and expel the ring to the window. Ryan saw the ring flew out of the apartment in slow motion. He looks out of the window to see where it fell and he quickly ran down to get it.

SCENE 6:

CUT TO: Outside, Night

He was too late. A homeless hobo got it 1^st.

Hobo

GOLD FELL FROM HEAVENS!!

Ryan

That’s Mine!

 Hobo

I got it 1^st!!ITS MINE!!!

SCENE 7:

The Hobo ran and Ryan chase after him. There a Slow mo shot. After a chase Ryan rugby tackle the hobo and they go into a fight. Kung Fu fight filled with slow mo shot and exaggerated kicks and everything. But in the end Ryan won and took the ring back. The hobo withdrew after losing.

Ryan(Punch the air up pose and did a little victory dance)

GOT IT!

Police car light appears on the back ground.

Police

Your under arrest for fighting!

Ryan(still Punch the air up pose frozen but smile dies)

Shit.

ACT3 (RESOLUTION)

SCENE 8:

CUT TO: Jail cell

Ryan

And that’s how I got here….

Ryan was talking to the guard officer behind the bars. He was laughing in the background.

Ryan

This isn’t Funny you know?

Guard Officer

I know I Know but….hahaahahahahah

Ryan rolled his eyes. Chief Officer came in and the guard suddenly stops laughing and straighten up. Chief Officer walks in front of Ryan’s cell.

. Chief Officer

Ryan Woodwalker. You’re bailed by a lass.

Chief Officer open Ryan cell and get him out and lead him out. The guard Officer came near him and whisper.Guard Officer

Good luck…..

SCENE 9:

CUT TO: Outside Police Station ,Morning

Jaime

OH GOD ! Ryan what happen?

Ryan

Forget that….I’ve been wanting to do this all night,I’ve been through Hell and back just to get this

Ryan takes out the ring. Jamie Gasp.

Ryan

From the 1^st time I saw you…I knew I will marry you….So Jaime Lisender…Would you like to marry me?

EXT.Black Still

Jaime

Yes.

THE END

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POST #1 
1. 1 sentence summary
- give me all 5 summaries from your Ex2
- bold & underline theone story chosen for your Assignment
2. Character Bio
- info relevant to story



1)Adonis-A broken man trying to start his day normally but his emotions get the better of him.


2)Blue Periwinkle-A poor man who gained an unlikely friend(baby) by losing(death) one friend in a process (work)


3)Moss-An overprotective single parent interrogating his daughter’s date for the prom.


4)Christmas Rose-Adrian thought he lost his wedding ring when it turns out his pregnant wife had it all along.


5)After losing her family, Gabrielle was raised by her uncle but as a prostitute, Gabrielle attained freedom from a fight with her drunken uncle where she escape to her prison; subconsciously leading herself to her old home, seeing a new family inhabit her house, jealousy and despair overcame her mind; making her commit a suicide by crashing her body to a fast moving car.


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